Brainstorm of ideas:
- Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, firefighters, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
- See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen, stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
- smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking
PEOPLE/SETTING
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PROBLEM
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SOLUTION
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Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,
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Car crash
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A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service,
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No glasses so couldn’t see
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injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts
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Firefighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
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On the phone
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Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.
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Fire extinguisher, put sawdust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
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Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.
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Title:
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Car crash
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Intro
2 sentences
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On a bright kowhai sol day. A drunk drinking man was driving in his car all in sudden he keep on doing loud noises with the car.
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Orientation 5-10 sentences
WHEN
WHO
WHAT
WHERE
WHY
HOW
CHARACTERS
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The drinking drunk driver name was John Cena who was inside a nissan car. He was driving to pick some friends up to go to the club . While he was driving he was also drinking and listing to loud music when he was driving the car. He was so drunk that he still drove the car to get his friends to go to the club also so that they could be more drunk.
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Problem
5-10 sentences
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He was driving meanwhile he forgot that the petrol was open and the engine was gonna blow up so that mean the whole car would explode. He called the fire fighters to come rescue him while he was drinking.
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Solution
5-10 sentences
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The firefighter show up and get John Cena of the car by using jaws after that they put sawdust on the petrol before it explodes in the road.
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Conclusion
Less than 5 sentences
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John cena was sent to the hospital because he was really drunk also he was glad that he was alive. He told himself he would never be drunk again and have good health.
Thank you for reading
Lily. U
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Malo lele ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be blogging about narrative. Today I learnt that narratives are fiction which mean made up stories
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