Blog commenting on Summuree

Kia orana ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be blog commenting on Summuree ! The reason I'm blog commenting on her is because she is a quiet person in class that would always try to finish work on time and is kind to everyone in class ! I commented on her inquriy task !  here is her what I commented !

 

LilyJuly 31, 2018 at 8:52 PM

Kia orana ! Summere this inquiry topic is really good ! maybe nextime could you add a description because people might not know what you mean and that it could make more sense ! but still it was an awesome work !
Ka pai
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The next thing she should work on is 

1. she need to add a description before blogging

2. check if it make sense 

3. she could explain what it is the inquriy task about 

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Back to school!

Bonjour Readers and whoever is reading  ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be blogging that were going back to school tomorrow which  I'm  so happy about coming to school since I really miss my friends and I want to come back and learn more so that I'm ready for term 3 this term I will be more blogging and might be changing some goals  every term, I'm excited to come back to school plus our inquiry topic this term is about NATURAL DISASTER so it like the bad weather say like hurricane, cyclone, Ruapotaka (earth quakes), those kind of things so that what I'm really happy to be back at school and learn more for the best things in life ! 
IALT: TELL readers about going back to school !
Malo aptouio and thanks for reading!
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memorie verse

Bonjour readers ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be blogging a memory verse ! 

This the memory verse from  Genesis 1:1

In the beginning God created the heaven and the earth.

This memory verse is about god who create this world and earth for everyone to live that is why we have a everlasting life  that is why he made this earth so that we can have peace all together and that we can see the world how it is !
Many thanks

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😎Congrats Lydia😎

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Hola everyone ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be saying Congrats Lydia for reaching up to 200 this year ! I am really proud for her and she had a really fantastic that she has a growth mindset and she has bening to do well with amazed that she is doing more cybersmart it is kind of good that I appreciate and she is a really great student leader that she is amazing to be a student in Tamaki and learn more ! Lydia is beautiful and smart that she believe in herself and would try again she is a really lovely person to have in class and she is a very intalenge person to have in class

HOLIDAYS !!!!!!!!! YES YES

Bula vanka ! Welcome back to my blog ! Tonight I would just be saying that this the first week of HOLIDAYS!! Today was a really a tried day because we had to do clean up the house which was boring at the same time we nearly spent our time watching tv after that we went to the Hobson drive park and had some fun ! But I think that the other days would be better than this day because Tomorrow morning I will be sleeping  and then wake up do something ! I am so ready for some fun! 
Question: How is your holiday going 
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Good afternoon

Bonjour ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be just saying good afternoon ! How is your weekend going and have a  sunshine day this afternoon !
Question: What are you doing now ?

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IM BACK!!!!

Kia ora ! Welcome back to my blog !  Today I will be just saying that I'm back! 
I am sorry for not blogging this week because it is the last day of school I want to blog more so that why I just want to say I'm back ! Hope you enjoy this holidays ! Have fun with whanau and friends

Maths

Malo lele ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be blogging ! Maths ! 

Walking narrative

Brainstorm of ideas - friends, walking, bush, mud, wet dew Describing character/setting - going for a walk to the bush, bags, bright kowhai t shirt, pink mawhero t shirt, Ideas for the problem - Got hurt, fall down, took for ages, winning, arguing, Ideas for the solution - Happy, excited, played, talk , stop arguing,

 

start, fall down, took for ages, winning, arguing, 

Ideas for the solution -  Happy, excited, played, talk , stop arguing,

Start here: On a chilled relaxing saturday  morning Jack and James went for a cool relaxing bush walk out in the woods .

When they were walking  they got see the beautiful mother nature with amazing it amazing creature shroud by the bright seaweed green when they were walking they could explore more out in the nature, that they were having so much fun on that relaxing day.

Meanwhile James went off by himself of to a  bush farway from Jack that he was hiding than he fall down and hurt himself. Now he was stuck because he couldn't find his way  out so Jack went to look for him, when he was looking for him but he couldn’t find him so he look at every bush but he could still look for him so he said to himself “where are you james” he yelled  James heard him and said “here in the end of the bushes”

So Jake ran to him and found him, they both went back home and were happy to see each other that they had a wonderful morning and adventure looking  at the creatures that it was a great exploring.