Blog commenting on Summuree

Kia orana ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be blog commenting on Summuree ! The reason I'm blog commenting on her is because she is a quiet person in class that would always try to finish work on time and is kind to everyone in class ! I commented on her inquriy task !  here is her what I commented !

 

LilyJuly 31, 2018 at 8:52 PM

Kia orana ! Summere this inquiry topic is really good ! maybe nextime could you add a description because people might not know what you mean and that it could make more sense ! but still it was an awesome work !
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The next thing she should work on is 

1. she need to add a description before blogging

2. check if it make sense 

3. she could explain what it is the inquriy task about 

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