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Saturday, June 30, 2018

Inspiring singers DLO


Bonjour  ! Welcome back to my blog ! I just made this DLO about insprie singer to me ! 
Question: Who do you inspire
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Friday, June 29, 2018

Description about grace


Malo lele ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I made a drawing about a description about my big sister Grace.

Playing The Virtiual PIANIO

Malo lele ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be just saying that I  want to play the Virtual piano to play havana ! It was actually fun playing on it I really am learning something really new !
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Nearly reaching up too 300! YEH

Kia ora ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be just saying that 25 more to reach up to 300 ! I would love to have more to reach up to a classmate person name Hiria she has 415 and I just have 275 I need more to catch up to her ! While I like to blog more about other things that involve cybersmart ! Why do I blog more? Because I want to find out if everyone can know me well that I like to have a growth mindset and have a great day by blogging at midnight! I can not belive I have 25 more to go to catch up to 300 and now I want to achieve that by blogging 600 this could mean next year I could blog more and achieve all my goals and have fun with it ! 
Question: how many blog post do you have 
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Music

Kia ora ! Welcome back to my blog  ! In music we had to use our netbooks to go on the virtual piano that we had to learn the song Twinkle little star and This old man ! We had so much fun playing on the virtual piano !
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Narrative





Start here: A Man named James was in advatrue. When he was climbing to the hills he decide to just go for a swim so he got his rope and change into his togs and went down to the deep splash waterfall. He had so much fun on that day that he wanted to do it again.
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WALT write detailed descriptions of settings and characters



Kia orana ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I made this presentation all about the detail of the characters and settings.

Finding descriptive language


Malo lele ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today RM 7 had just find some examples of a description of the orientation  that has great describing about the character.
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Good morning !!!!!!!

kia ora ! Welcome back to my blog ! Good morning Everyone hope you had a great night and have a refreshing new day to come to  come to school !  Hope you guys have a really great morning to come to school ! Good morning everyone !
Hope you have a great morning !

Thursday, June 28, 2018

LAST WEEK OF SCHOOL !! YES

Kia ora ! Welcome back to my blog ! It is the last week of school and that means school holidays !!! YEH. I am going to be blogging more on the last week so that I have more blog post and have reached up to 300 this year ! Exciting until we have school holidays and we have only 6 more day to go yeah we are nearly finishing school !!!!!!!! Hope you are so exhausted from this day
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Good night

GOOD NIGHT ! Tonight I am so exhausted at blogging so I hope everyone would have a good night sleep ! Go TO SLEEP PEOPLE FOR SCHOOL! Good night everyone hope you guys would love your sleep and have a great morning to start with! Good nighImage result for good night gif
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Put a ring around it


Talofa lava ! Welcome back to my blog ! I did this reading task
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No escape


Bonjour ! Welcome back to my blog ! Tonight I will be blogging a reading task. In this book it is all about that their is no escape to go in a black hole.
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reading task !


Hi everyone ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today Me and Hiria made this google drawing about the book named postcards in space . Hope you enjoy this post !
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Lily - Fairy tale introduction

Introductions 


Once upon time in a movie set there was a famous celebrity actress named  Rachel who was enormously famous for her actress. Rachel lived in a amazing place named Las Vegas. 

Once upon a time there was a marvelous girl named Alicia. Ailica lived in Las Vegas she was enormously rich because  she was really wise for everything that  she has done at school that she was good at her education at school. 


Once upon a time
One sunny day
One beautiful bright sunny day
One marvelous day
One horrible rainy day
One sad dreary day



In a faraway land
In the deepest ocean
In the darkest prison
Far far away
In a dark forest
In a vast desert
In a creepy dungeon
In the scary woods
In a haunted house
In a movie set
In a creepy maze
In a wonderful school
In a small town


There was
A beautiful girl
An old man
Royal family
A wise girl
A handsome man
A traveller
A scary monster
A butler
Guards
Handsome prince
beautiful queen
Creepy clown
Young princess
Royal king
Famous celebrity
A gangster bodyguard
A music producer
A sad servant
A sneaky thief 
Who was Lost
Enormously rich
Poor
Diva
Who lived in a cottage
Who had 6 sons and 6 daughters
Had a glass eyeball
Had a ginormous family
Lived in las vegas
Who had robotic legs
Who was a marvellous actor
Who only ever had onions
Who was a robber
Who lived on the streets
Part time DJ part time spy
Who had only leg
Who was a murderer
Who was a huge nerd
Who had one fat eye

Malo lele ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today RM 7 had been doing a narttive fairy tale introduction !
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READING TASK !


Malo lele ! Welcome back to my blog !  Today I will be blogging about the reading task me and  Waiari  did ! Hope you like this post !

good morning !!!!!!!!!!

Kia ora !  Welcome back to my blog ! Good morning Hope you had a good night sleep on yesterday and having a great day! GOOD MORNING EVERYONE GET READY FOR SCHOOL!!!
hOPE YOU HAVE A GREAT MORNING 
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Tuesday, June 26, 2018

Narrative plan


Brainstorm of ideas:
  • Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, firefighters, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
  • See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
  • smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking

PEOPLE/SETTING
PROBLEM
SOLUTION
Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,
Car crash
A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service,
No glasses so couldn’t see
injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts
Firefighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
On the phone
Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.
Fire extinguisher, put sawdust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.



Title:
Car crash
Intro
2 sentences
On a bright kowhai sol day. A drunk drinking man was driving in his  car all in sudden he keep on doing loud noises with the car.
Orientation 5-10 sentences
WHEN
WHO
WHAT
WHERE
WHY
HOW
CHARACTERS
The drinking  drunk driver name was  John Cena who was inside a nissan car. He was driving to pick some friends up to go to the  club . While he was driving he was also drinking and listing to loud music when he was driving the car.  He was so drunk that he still drove the car to get his friends to go to the club also so that they could be more drunk.
Problem
5-10 sentences
He was driving meanwhile he forgot that  the petrol was open and the engine was gonna blow up so that mean  the whole car would explode. He called the fire fighters to come rescue him while he was drinking.
Solution
5-10 sentences
The firefighter show up and get John Cena of the car by using jaws after that they put sawdust on the petrol before it explodes in the road.
Conclusion
Less than 5 sentences
John cena was sent to the hospital because he was really drunk also he was glad that he was alive. He told himself he would never be drunk again and have good health.
Thank you for reading
Lily. U
Malo lele ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be blogging about narrative. Today  I learnt that narratives are fiction which mean made up stories 

good moring !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

malo lele! welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be blogging about good morning ! Hope everyone had a good night sleep and really what to wake up for school to get ready and may everyone have a good day ! Hope you enjoy This morning an have a nice day ! Please comment down below !  
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Monday, June 25, 2018

Blog commenting on Dwyane

Bonjour ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be blog commenting on... Dwyane !                 

Why did I chose her? Because she is helpful kind friend and what I like about her is that she like to try her best ! Let continue on with the comment here is the comment I gave her. Cilck here to go on Dwayne's blog.

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tips

  1. give nice comment to someone
  2. tell them what to do nextime
  3. say something why did you chose them.
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1 comment:


  1. Hi dwyane, I like your pictures but I can you add a discription but I like what you did. Ka pai
    Lily
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Changing my Blogging goals

Malo lele ! Welcome back to my blog ! Tonight I will be changing my blog goals ! The first goal would have to be reaching up to 300 this year .
The second goal would have to be blogging commenting by the end of term 2 
The the last goal would have to be blogging positives things and public thing that you want to blog about.
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Reading Book about the Magician's Elephant

Malo lele ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be blogging about a book that I will be reading over the week . This book is called The Magician's Elephant. This book is about a boy name  Peter went inside a tent which there was a fortune teller who in there and he had a question to her Is my Sister live? and she answer it and said that she was alive.
Here is a drawing I made.
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Lily and Waiari Twinkle Twinkle star colours


Bonjour! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be blogging about the reading Task Me and Waiari  did together we had lots of facts about the story it was really fun to do this reading task. 
Cilck on Task link 
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Sunday, June 24, 2018

Blog commenting - MARIA again

Talofa lava ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be blog comting on maria again !  Why I chose her? Because she is sweet and Kind and what I like about her is that she like to ask for help and asks for my advice. Let continue on back with our blog commenting.  here is her comment that I gave 

1 comment:

  1. MALO LELEI LIA I like your video but nex time you could add a description to make it a bite better but still you did great filming that video.
    LOL LILY.U
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Here is Maria link to her blog
Question: have you ever blog comment on someone
IALT: Tell everyone how to blog comment on someone 


Listening to music

Bonjour ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I thought of blogging about playing music ! I am just listening to music or just watching videos which is mostly what I do ! 
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Question: what music would you listen to?
IALT: Tell everyone I am blogging and listening to music 




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