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Wednesday, March 14, 2018

writing a story about our day in 1850

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  1. Hi Lily, from looking at your work I know that it is great but maybe you could try using a more simple background or changing the colour of you writing because I can't see it because the colours really blend in. Look It is great work what I can see from your previous writings but yeah just changing the colour or using a more simple background.

    -Edith

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  2. THANKS EDITH FOR THE ADVICE,\
    -LILY

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