Hi lily, Firstly I would like to say amazing! I had no idea about tripoli yet because we are still getting there but now after reading your Tripoli DLO I now know what happened in tripoli. Maybe next time you could write more detail like for example Allies and Axis. You could write which countries are in each side and who is the good guys? Who is not the good guys?. You know so that your work is up to your year standard. Next time just think about that giving more detail into your answers.
Hi lily,
ReplyDeleteFirstly I would like to say amazing! I had no idea about tripoli yet because we are still getting there but now after reading your Tripoli DLO I now know what happened in tripoli. Maybe next time you could write more detail like for example Allies and Axis. You could write which countries are in each side and who is the good guys? Who is not the good guys?. You know so that your work is up to your year standard. Next time just think about that giving more detail into your answers.