Yesterday on Monday (24th September 2018 ). After lunch Room 7 was heading out for P.E. We had earnt free time last Friday, but instead it start raining so we couldn't going out, so Miss Ashley promised we would go next week. So it was P.E instead......
Firstly We headed outside to go for P.E in the field and we were waiting for Waiari and Summuree to bring the softball equipment. So We got into lines off year 5 and year 6. Then Syariah lee and Havea had to do rock;paper and scissor (which Havea Won the game ), so he decide to go for the bat, so the year 5 sat down on the bench waiting for their turn. When it came to my turn I hold the bat with two hands then I put my feet next to the tree then I hit the bat and ran like a wild animal to the other base. So when someone alsie hit the ball I ran but didn't make it, so I was out. We swop over with the year 6s so now they were the baters and we were in the field guarding it. So while we were trying to make the year 6 out but they were so good at hit.
Tuesday, September 25, 2018
Monday, September 24, 2018
How to use different kinds of punctuation
Colon and semi-colon.
BEFORE: BETWEEN;
Miss Ashley’s example:
Mary went to the fruit shop and bought lots of different fruit. She bought: bananas; pears; apples; and a pineapple.
The girls team had 10 players. The team was: Hiria; Ana; Maria; Vina; Lily; Vaiola and Maani.
My examples:
There are 7 colors in the rainbow. The colors are: red; orange; yellow; violet; blue ; green; idgo
I have 10 cousins. There name are: Lydia ; Kingston ; Wesley ; So Sia ; Esile ; Mary Jane ; Ben ; Marcus ; Nafi ; Vina ;
Commas in listing.
Miss Ashley’s example: The girls team had 10 players. The team was Hiria, Ana, Maria, Vina, Lily, Vaiola and Maani.
My examples:
In my family there is 6 people. Mom, Dad, Sister (Grace), Sister ( Ana), Brother ( Joseph) and (me!)
I have 12 cousins. There names are Joseph, Isabela, Nafi, Holvea, Ana, Passi, Miriam , Mary Jane, Marcaus, Jonathan and Sela
Brackets.
Miss Ashley’s example:
Mum gave Lucy (her favourite daughter) $10 for lunch.
Miss Ashley had 27 students (both girls and boys) in her class.
My examples:
On Monday (21st of September 2018 ). I woke up to go to school.
I had many cousins ( which were both girls and boys ) They were the best cousins ever.
BEFORE: BETWEEN;
Miss Ashley’s example:
Mary went to the fruit shop and bought lots of different fruit. She bought: bananas; pears; apples; and a pineapple.
The girls team had 10 players. The team was: Hiria; Ana; Maria; Vina; Lily; Vaiola and Maani.
My examples:
There are 7 colors in the rainbow. The colors are: red; orange; yellow; violet; blue ; green; idgo
I have 10 cousins. There name are: Lydia ; Kingston ; Wesley ; So Sia ; Esile ; Mary Jane ; Ben ; Marcus ; Nafi ; Vina ;
Commas in listing.
Miss Ashley’s example: The girls team had 10 players. The team was Hiria, Ana, Maria, Vina, Lily, Vaiola and Maani.
My examples:
In my family there is 6 people. Mom, Dad, Sister (Grace), Sister ( Ana), Brother ( Joseph) and (me!)
I have 12 cousins. There names are Joseph, Isabela, Nafi, Holvea, Ana, Passi, Miriam , Mary Jane, Marcaus, Jonathan and Sela
Brackets.
Miss Ashley’s example:
Mum gave Lucy (her favourite daughter) $10 for lunch.
Miss Ashley had 27 students (both girls and boys) in her class.
My examples:
On Monday (21st of September 2018 ). I woke up to go to school.
I had many cousins ( which were both girls and boys ) They were the best cousins ever.
Editing a story
Here is our edited story.
Things we learnt about were
We aren’t allowed to use then, and, also and because at the beginning of a sentence.
Speech marks go on the OUTSIDE of the full stop or other punctuation.
The end of a sentence can be marked by a full stop, an exclamation mark or a question mark. You don’t need to put an extra full stop after a question mark.
Remember to check ALL capital letters. Sometimes we need to put them in and sometimes we need to take them out.
On Monday 24th September 2018 Room 7 did a blindfold challenge. We wanted to have fun and make our morning a bit interesting by playing a game.
Firstly Miss Ashley told us the rules which was “no touching the tables or pieces of paper on the floor or you will lose points.“ However you are allowed to touch the chairs because you sometimes have to step over them to get to the end. Next we got into buddies. My buddy was Lucina. We had to line up by the heater in our buddies.
First it was my turn to go so Lucina (my buddy) put the blindfold on me (over my eyes) and helped me to stand up. The blindfold was tight it felt like a constrictor boa on my face. I felt so confused and disorientated because the blindfold was covering my eyes. Lucina told me to “go left, right, straight and step over.” I was feeling nervous and a little bit scared because “what if she was tricking me?“ and I was really doing something silly. I got to the end safely and took my blindfold off.
Next it was my buddies turn so I helped her put the blindfold on. I told her to walk straight first, then next turn left. She doesn’t know her lefts and rights so she went the wrong way.I said “no your other left” and it was a little bit funny. In the end we got to the blue fruit tray and we made it without losing any points!
I think I would like to do this activity again because it was cool to do something different and fun in class especially since it’s the end of the term and I think we are all feeling kind of tired.
Things we learnt about were
We aren’t allowed to use then, and, also and because at the beginning of a sentence.
Speech marks go on the OUTSIDE of the full stop or other punctuation.
The end of a sentence can be marked by a full stop, an exclamation mark or a question mark. You don’t need to put an extra full stop after a question mark.
Remember to check ALL capital letters. Sometimes we need to put them in and sometimes we need to take them out.
On Monday 24th September 2018 Room 7 did a blindfold challenge. We wanted to have fun and make our morning a bit interesting by playing a game.
Firstly Miss Ashley told us the rules which was “no touching the tables or pieces of paper on the floor or you will lose points.“ However you are allowed to touch the chairs because you sometimes have to step over them to get to the end. Next we got into buddies. My buddy was Lucina. We had to line up by the heater in our buddies.
First it was my turn to go so Lucina (my buddy) put the blindfold on me (over my eyes) and helped me to stand up. The blindfold was tight it felt like a constrictor boa on my face. I felt so confused and disorientated because the blindfold was covering my eyes. Lucina told me to “go left, right, straight and step over.” I was feeling nervous and a little bit scared because “what if she was tricking me?“ and I was really doing something silly. I got to the end safely and took my blindfold off.
Next it was my buddies turn so I helped her put the blindfold on. I told her to walk straight first, then next turn left. She doesn’t know her lefts and rights so she went the wrong way.I said “no your other left” and it was a little bit funny. In the end we got to the blue fruit tray and we made it without losing any points!
I think I would like to do this activity again because it was cool to do something different and fun in class especially since it’s the end of the term and I think we are all feeling kind of tired.
Friday, September 21, 2018
Blindfolded challenge Refelction
INTRO -
WHAT: Blindfold challenge.
WHERE: room 7
WHY: For fun
WHEN: Friday 21st September 2018, 9.10am
HOW: got into buddies, Miss Ashley arranged the furniture
WHO: Room 7 students
PARAGRAPH 1:
Get in buddies
Miss Ashley gave instructions and rules - points.
In your head, made a plan of which way to go
Say who your buddy was.
PARAGRAPH 2: WHEN YOU WERE BLINDFOLDED
Feelings: paralysed, nervous, scared, excited, sleepy, felt comfortable because I had done it before, trust my buddy??? Felt like i was going the wrong. Felt like a robot.
How did it feel to have a blindfold on?
Happened: lost points because we touched the paper/tables, fell over,
Banged into each other.
Table pushed me to the side
Furniture was like spikes in Fortnite.
Screaming like it was a justin bieber concert
Kaboom
“ahhh”
PARAGRAPH 3: WHEN YOU WERE TELLING YOUR BUDDY WHERE TO GO
Tell them to “go straight, go left and right, go on the chair and jump on it, crawl, climb over, duck, stop stop stop, lean over, reach out, grab the chair, step over, confirm or deny”
Felt like the general of an army, an army of one.
Felt like: excited, angry, nervous, strong, fearless, in control,
CONCLUSION: (Choose one of these)
My favourite was..
I felt ..\
It was easy/hard because..
I would or wouldn’t do this again because...
Start Here:
INTRO:
On Friday ( 21st of September 2018). First in the morning around 9 or 10 am Room 7 did the roll. Room 7 then decide to do a blindfold challenge for some fun. We got into buddies and sat down on the mat.
Paragraph 1:
While we were sitting on the mat, Miss ashley came and told us the how to play the blindfold game. (rules 1. don't step on the paper and the table. 2. climb over the chair. 3. touch the purple egg tray. 4.
Paragraph 2:
While we're siting my buddy ( vina) was blindfolding, she put up her finger and I had to try to figure out how many fingers was she holding, I was cheating by looking at the ground, I was walking that I realize that vina wasn't saying anything so I took off my blindfolded and was like, "OMG I was cheating " I told myself. I was shocked that I cheated that I need to stop and let vina have a turn.
Paragraph 3: So now it was swop over, It was now vina's turn, I first blindfolded her then I put my fingers up so then she can figure out how many fingers I was holding. "Vina go straight" I yelled.
"Okay Lily " respond Vina.
So we kept on going and she climb over the chair then she had to go straight again to climb over the chair then she touch the egg tray. So that means we came back with 10p when we were sitting on the mat.
Conclusion: I felt very dumb that I had cheated because I was really nervous now I think I don't want to do it again ! It was so boring but fun when I was the guide for my buddy.
WHAT: Blindfold challenge.
WHERE: room 7
WHY: For fun
WHEN: Friday 21st September 2018, 9.10am
HOW: got into buddies, Miss Ashley arranged the furniture
WHO: Room 7 students
PARAGRAPH 1:
Get in buddies
Miss Ashley gave instructions and rules - points.
In your head, made a plan of which way to go
Say who your buddy was.
PARAGRAPH 2: WHEN YOU WERE BLINDFOLDED
Feelings: paralysed, nervous, scared, excited, sleepy, felt comfortable because I had done it before, trust my buddy??? Felt like i was going the wrong. Felt like a robot.
How did it feel to have a blindfold on?
Happened: lost points because we touched the paper/tables, fell over,
Banged into each other.
Table pushed me to the side
Furniture was like spikes in Fortnite.
Screaming like it was a justin bieber concert
Kaboom
“ahhh”
PARAGRAPH 3: WHEN YOU WERE TELLING YOUR BUDDY WHERE TO GO
Tell them to “go straight, go left and right, go on the chair and jump on it, crawl, climb over, duck, stop stop stop, lean over, reach out, grab the chair, step over, confirm or deny”
Felt like the general of an army, an army of one.
Felt like: excited, angry, nervous, strong, fearless, in control,
CONCLUSION: (Choose one of these)
My favourite was..
I felt ..\
It was easy/hard because..
I would or wouldn’t do this again because...
Start Here:
INTRO:
On Friday ( 21st of September 2018). First in the morning around 9 or 10 am Room 7 did the roll. Room 7 then decide to do a blindfold challenge for some fun. We got into buddies and sat down on the mat.
Paragraph 1:
While we were sitting on the mat, Miss ashley came and told us the how to play the blindfold game. (rules 1. don't step on the paper and the table. 2. climb over the chair. 3. touch the purple egg tray. 4.
Paragraph 2:
While we're siting my buddy ( vina) was blindfolding, she put up her finger and I had to try to figure out how many fingers was she holding, I was cheating by looking at the ground, I was walking that I realize that vina wasn't saying anything so I took off my blindfolded and was like, "OMG I was cheating " I told myself. I was shocked that I cheated that I need to stop and let vina have a turn.
Paragraph 3: So now it was swop over, It was now vina's turn, I first blindfolded her then I put my fingers up so then she can figure out how many fingers I was holding. "Vina go straight" I yelled.
"Okay Lily " respond Vina.
So we kept on going and she climb over the chair then she had to go straight again to climb over the chair then she touch the egg tray. So that means we came back with 10p when we were sitting on the mat.
Conclusion: I felt very dumb that I had cheated because I was really nervous now I think I don't want to do it again ! It was so boring but fun when I was the guide for my buddy.
Yoga reflection
On Monday (17th of september 2018) Room 7 did a special activity ( which was called Yoga challenge). We just wanted to have some fun doing the yoga challenge. We got into buddies and sat on the mat.
My buddy was Waiari, “when we saw the first poise we were like ” OMG this is so easy to do” I told Waiari “ Yeah your right Lily” Waiari respond nicely
So we had to sit down and clasp your hands and lead back. The next one, we need to stand up to make a heart with our buddy, it was pretty easy then I thought.
The other one got really challenging because we had to be really flexible, we have to put one of leg up then hold hands, the other one got really challenging me and Waiari started to kept on trying every yoga, most of it was like shapes and pretty easy.
The other ones got more harder, Me and waiari kept on trying again and never giving up because it was a challenge, we like that even if we failed we got up and try so then we can never give up, one of the poise were pretty hard ( which was the last one ) because someone had do the bridge ( which was me ) Waiari had to do.
I felt really happy to do the activy because it was really fun, how we can see if we are flexible or not.
Authour:lily
checked by waiari
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Punctuation - ? ! ; : ‘
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Words are written in past tense
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Connectives - next, then, afterwards
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Deep features
Introduction has who, what, when, where, why, and how
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Conclusion has a reflective statement or says how you felt
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Ideas/events in the right order
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3 paragraphs
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Onomatopoeia, alliteration and/or idiom
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Different types of sentences - short, long, compound and complex
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One thing that lily did well was…Capital letters at the beginning of a sentence
One thing that lily needs to Speech marks when people are talking,
Thursday, September 20, 2018
Hurricanes
Kia ora and greeting to you all ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be telling you guys most information about what my group (in my group is me, waiari, stanley,) is doing for ako evening. Our group is basically doing hurricanes because our inquriy topic is about natural disasters. We had finish our by using some questions and facts to show you guys more information about hurricanes.
Here is our questions, facts.
LILY- What causes hurricanes?
The Hurricanes are formed over ocean in the autumn. The wind causes warm water that it start to evaporate and rise into the atmosphere. Clouds start to release heat into the air and the waves becomes to warm that the hurricane starts.
WAIARI- Fun facts about hurricanes
Hurricane,typhoon and cyclone is the same thing Also hurricanes form over water.Hurricanes last for weeks.It's also known for a tropical cyclone.Hurricanes a deadliest storm.It's capable of destroying cities and buildings.The name of hurricane derive from the name tanio
STANLEY- What is a hurricane
A hurricane is a strong storm and is the biggest natural disasters. It can affect people’s life by coming over land and destroy houses, animals, environment.
Here is our questions, facts.
LILY- What causes hurricanes?
The Hurricanes are formed over ocean in the autumn. The wind causes warm water that it start to evaporate and rise into the atmosphere. Clouds start to release heat into the air and the waves becomes to warm that the hurricane starts.
WAIARI- Fun facts about hurricanes
Hurricane,typhoon and cyclone is the same thing Also hurricanes form over water.Hurricanes last for weeks.It's also known for a tropical cyclone.Hurricanes a deadliest storm.It's capable of destroying cities and buildings.The name of hurricane derive from the name tanio
STANLEY- What is a hurricane
A hurricane is a strong storm and is the biggest natural disasters. It can affect people’s life by coming over land and destroy houses, animals, environment.
Many thanks !
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Fun fact ( typhoon, hurricane ,cyclone are all the same thing)
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