Santa Letter

Dear santa,

Thank you  for the presents. I  was so excited when I got them.I really loved it because  it was roller skates and coloring pencils. When  I had the roller skates, I was trying to  ride it. I like my present so much because it was so enjoyable to play with.Thank you very much santa .I really appreciate how you gave me a wonderful pretty present.

Love

From Lily

Merry christmas Santa and happy new year

My recount

On Saturday morning  me my family dressed up nicely for my aunt's wedding, when we got inside the car my dad straight away drive the car to the Hamilton temple .

Which me and my sister were really tried so my dad stop at the MacDonald and ate, then we went to the temple we saw my cousin with her older sister in the car.

Then We were at the temple and I went and hung my aunt and she said ‘you look beautiful’ then I said thank you then when we were waiting Grace and  I  went to grandpa and nan so we could go see the  feed after that we arrived there.

I saw my dad he was like amazed about me then Aunt Ana wanted me and my older sister to go with her to be the flower girls that it was so amazing because  I had to throw gently the flowers.

The bride my aunt and my Uncle was walking front to the door at went inside  we had the feed that it was so delicious.

after that we tide the place up and I leave with my 19 yr old cousin and I went with her brother and her husband drop us of back so when we arrived we went to my house.

So we had some of the leftover cake it was yummy then I had a long break by watching TV then mum drop Nan back to her house then we went to sleep for church.

The end

Guy fawkes

                    Guy  fawkes

“Mum hurry up I wanted do Guy fawkes now” I moaned.

Mum said  to wait until it was  dark when it was  really night time me and my cousins saw a  fiery  matches and  my uncle came with the matches and fire them and it went boom it was so loud that my cousin was screaming so loud that my baby  sister Ana was crying so hard out that she stayed inside with my little cousin and they just watched Tv.

When we boom the fireworks it was a really great time because my cousin and kept on running around his dad’s car and me and my sister, cousins  were going to scream like animals so the sky look so beautiful.

But there was so much smokey ashes that  was coming so we stand back and kept on blowing until dad finished the fiery orangey matches after that we all said good beye and me and my big sister Grace went up the tree.

Said Mate ma'a tonga when my mum was taking the photo then we went back to the house.

Me and Grace went back to our room and slept for school.

Diwali

The legend of Sina and the eel

The legend of sina and the eel

By Tockasse Lily Uasi Jasmine  for my Narrative Writing.

‘ Why do I have to go to my friend the eel in the evening to the pretty white amazing moonlight’ said sina. In the ancient island of sivae.  

Sina was waiting until evening so that she  could see the eel  and when  the sunrise was setting she went to the ocean and when  the sunrise was setting she went to the ocean how he turn into a prince that after that he large and bigger that   his love washed away  so sina  ran away to the village with  basket.

When Sina the pretty beauty girl walked  to her tiny house  she told her uncle about the eel then she heard that eel will be killed by her cousin on the  next day.

When it was   the next day when it was evening her cousin was going to kill the eel with his really sharp knife then he was  going to amiy the eel’s neck to huge head so that he

could be dead forever.

When the eel was  going  to die he told Sina to buried him.

In the soft squishy sand so that when grows into  a plant.

That the plant would be growing  into a  coconut tree.

So when she drinks the coconut and it would be grow so big into a great coconut tree.

The End.

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Lily Character description

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Lily - Describing my scene

WALT describe our scene for our narrative.

WALT describe our scene for our narrative.

In  the morning  at  the  beach  the  sun’s rays were  reflecting  through  the  pama  leaves. The wet soft sand was under my feet and it felt squishy. The fresh breeze made me chilly and cold. The smell of salty water and seaweeds was around  the ocean. It felt really divine and Godly. I wanted to enjoy every bit of it.

My weenked Recount

Going to the Moana beach.

By Tockasse Lily Jasmine Uasi.

On my weekend  me and my family went to the beach it was really hot and warm  we arrived there the water made a sound like kittens lopping .

Change  to our togs then we  went into the cold water  that my siblings hopped at the back of my dad’s back after when they had a turn I tried but the  massive waves were coming so I had get down  of my Papa’s back.

After  that I swam with my Papa  to my Brother and Sister, when I could see them playing Tag. when I saw my mum at the beach with my little baby sister that my mum  took a video on her phone  of us swimming.

When we finally finished swimming we change into our clothes then we inside expensive van  after that we drove to the gas station and in my surprise   dad said we could get

anything to eat.

So we picked ice cream and biscuit after when dad did the gas my pops payed the gas for the energy for the van.

When we were at home we buy K.F.C although we had a picnic a couple of minutes we went inside and turn on the screen TV just then we watched a Movie called snow white    after the snow white we had tea then we went off to sleep for church. The End.
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