Blog commenting on Summuree

Kia orana ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be blog commenting on Summuree ! The reason I'm blog commenting on her is because she is a quiet person in class that would always try to finish work on time and is kind to everyone in class ! I commented on her inquriy task !  here is her what I commented !

 

LilyJuly 31, 2018 at 8:52 PM

Kia orana ! Summere this inquiry topic is really good ! maybe nextime could you add a description because people might not know what you mean and that it could make more sense ! but still it was an awesome work !
Ka pai
From Lily.U

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The next thing she should work on is 

1. she need to add a description before blogging

2. check if it make sense 

3. she could explain what it is the inquriy task about 

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IALT: Comment on other people

Question : have you comment on someone blog

Memory of the day !

Bonjour readers ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I am going to talk about one of my memory verse that I picked from Revelation 15 : 1-3 I saw in heaven another great and marvelous sign: seven angels with the seven last plagues—last, because with them God’s wrath is completed. And I saw what looked like a sea of glass glowing with fire and, standing beside the sea, those who had been victorious over the beast and its image and over the number of its name. They held harps given them by God and sang the song of God’s servant Moses and of the Lamb: This memory verse tells us about John one of the disciples has a vision of heaven, this is about God place where we might be some day and that it's true that Heaven is real ! This memory verse is a really good one in fact Did you know that Revelation is about Heaven ! So you should read the bible to find out more about Heaven ! 

IALT: Tell everyone about Our real God and about the Holy bible
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Good Afternoon !

Kia ora ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be blogging about  saying Good afternoon ! buenas tardes everyone ! I just had came back from church ! I had so much fun that I'm really sleepy since I didn't had that much sleep last night ! buenas tardes have a Good afternoon !

IALT: Greet my readers!

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Memory Verse of the day !

Kia ora ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I would be blogging the memory verse of the day !  So this is my verse  in tongan Sione 15:5  5

Ko au pē ko e vaine, ko kimoutolu ko e ngaahi va‘a: ko ia ‘oku nofo ma‘u ‘iate au, mo au ‘iate ‘ia, ‘oku fua lahi ‘a e toko taha ko ia: he ka māvae mo au, ‘oku ‘ikai te mou fa‘a fai ha me‘a. 

This verse in english is

I am the Vine; you are the branches. The one who remains in Me and I in him bears much fruit, for [otherwise] apart from Me [that is, cut off from vital union with Me] you can do nothing.

This memory verse is about the vine and the branches it talking about where you are going to Heaven or Hell ?

Question: What memory verse do you know ?

Good Afternoon !

IALT: Greet readers by saying Ahiahi Pai  

Hola Readers ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be greeting everyone by saying Good afternoon ! Good afternoon readers and have a nice afternoon !
Ahiahi Pai means good afternoon in Maori ! 
Question: What are you doing right now ?
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🎇HolidaysReflection🎇🎇

Malo lele and greeting to you all !!! Welcome back to my blog ! As you can see this is what I like in my holidays ! 

2 interesting things I did in the holidays was going to the matariki light trail (in G.I) and spending quality time with my friend 

It was finally saturday and I was feeling extremely Excited !!! (why?) Well it is because we were going to the Matariki Light trail, if you are wondering what the Matariki light trail is, it is basically an area that is all lighted up in the evening! You take a walk around it and you go through all these beautiful images that represent Matriki are all lighted up

(as I said in the beginning)   

We were just getting ready and we all burst into excitements! It wasn't a long drive since it was just down at G.I. It wasn't hard to spot the trail since you could already see it. We invited Kensington and his family to come with us! We went around the whole trail and taking pictures at the same time.  We finally ended the trail and it was time for the BIG FINISH! This was it! This was what I was excited for! The crowd counted down from 10: 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2...

BOOM! BOOM!

Fireworks were going everywhere! Loud noises and a colourful explosion! It was very loud that I nearly had a heart attack( luckily I didn't) and my ears were hurting from all the screaming! At the end I had the most enjoyable day with my family!

One thing that  I love to do with my friend Vaiola that every night we would chat it was a really fun time even we kept on laughing. I love this moment by talking with my friend Vaiola because we would be really happy to talk to each other which was the best holidays ever !

Hope you enjoy !
Malo aptioua

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Good night !

Malo lele ! Welcome back to my blog !I would just be just blogging tonight! Good night everyone today has been a great night sleep tight and sweet dreams to all ! Good night it has been a fast day every day ! manuia le po everyone who is reading. I'm really tired today has been a great day !

te po pai to who need to go to sleep earlier than your family!

Question: What time do you sleep?

IALT: Greet my readers by saying Good night

Summariser

Bula vanka ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I made this drawing because in the group I'm the summarise who tell like part of the story which mine is about Perdita part and other things! hope enjoy !

Weather conditions

Hola Humans and others!  Welcome back to my blog ! Today I found out that rain happens when there is cooler clouds and start to turn grey when the temperature is getting cold and when the air get more heavier that their is heavy rain ! hope you enjoy!

story plan

Kia ora  ! This is a story plan me and Hiria made up it mostly about a Halloween haunted Ghost trys to creep up on a boy ! Hope you like this post !

Discussion Director

Kia ora ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today Me and Waiari made this DLO about the 101 Dalmatians, So we can ask our group the questions so that they can answer it !
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How do we predict the weather !

Malo lele ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today In room 7 we learnt about these symbols what do they mean and what are ! Hope you enjoy it !
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Weather is made of

IALT: What is weather made of 
Malo lele Readers and People from the world ! Welcome back to my blog !  Today In room 7  we are learning about natural disasters which is Earthquakes, Hurricanes, cyclones, Lighting strikes, tsunami  ! Room 7 were actually studying about the weather so that we know more before we learn more about natural disasters through this term ! The weather is made of 3 thing which are Air pressure, Moisture, Temperature which is how the weather goes that so amazing that is what the weather is made out of !
Hope you enjoy this post
Question: What do like about the weather ?
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Layers of the Atmosphere

Bonjour! Welcome back to my blog ! Today in room 7 we started on our inquiry which about natural disasters  and This afternoon we learnt about the layers of the Atmosphere  !
Here is the link

PRE reading Graphic organizer

Bonjour ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be blog about this slideshow that I made about my reading task !

Autumn Leave

Summer was nearly ending and now autumn has just begin. Now autumn is coming the leaves start to fall down to the morning dew on the grass.

In a far away school there was a boy named jacob who was riding his bright Kowhai bike to pick up his friend named James. “Summer has ended” said Jacob 

“Yeah and now we have autumn” replied James 

They continued to walk to school suddenly Jacob push his bike and James fall down to the ground that it was really  hurtful, that his knee was bleeding that he really need help Jacob was trying to help his friend but he just felt guilty of himself that he hurt his own friend.  

 So a car stop by and helped James get up and gave him a plaster . “Sorry James” Jacob Resopnly said

“It okay Jacob” James Replied 

They finally went inside school and was really happy that they straight away went to class before they were late !

Bonjour ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today Me and Vaiola made this short narrative writing ! This is mainly about autumn leaves.

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Back to school!

Bonjour Readers and whoever is reading  ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be blogging that were going back to school tomorrow which  I'm  so happy about coming to school since I really miss my friends and I want to come back and learn more so that I'm ready for term 3 this term I will be more blogging and might be changing some goals  every term, I'm excited to come back to school plus our inquiry topic this term is about NATURAL DISASTER so it like the bad weather say like hurricane, cyclone, Ruapotaka (earth quakes), those kind of things so that what I'm really happy to be back at school and learn more for the best things in life ! 
IALT: TELL readers about going back to school !
Malo aptouio and thanks for reading!
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I'm Back!!!!

Bonjour Readers ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I would like to say that I'm back and I would  be blogging this week because I have been busy reading books and having a growth mindset by just reading lots of books to help me so that I can achieve so that I am above the national standard that why I haven't been blogging this whole week and I just want to say I'm back and I'm really happy to be back to blog again ! I can't not wait to tell about my holiday and everything else I want to tell you about also I thankful that I'm  back to blog again!! I'm really already happy because now I found out I reach up to 300 blog post which I was OMG I never knew blogging is really good because you share what have you learnt  and have a great growth mindset !

💙CONGRATULATIONS GRACE 💙!💙💙

Kanwhica readers! Welcome back to my blog! Today I would be saying Congrats Grace for reaching up to 100 this year I am really proud of her because she has finally reached up to 100 this year because now I am really happy  for her she has deserve this because me and her been challenge ourselves to see can make this far that I am really proud for her ! 

Here a little card for her I made  or would call a DLO

Good Morning

Hi Reader! Good morning readers ! This morning I would like to say good morning really late because I have been sleeping in and being felling sick from the cold  winter outside and staying inside drinking warm milo to keep you warm this winter and Good morning everyone!

🎉🎉🎉LOL!!I'm so happy to nearly 300 blog post !! LOL 🎉🎉🎉

Kia ora ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I am really happy for myself  that I'm nearly up to 300 blog post ! I been blogging this month that now I'm so proud of myself that I nearly have 300 and happy because I have been blogging this month so that I can reach to 300 and now I am nearly that is why I am so happy for myself because I would stay up late every night to blog that is why I like blogging because I am  always pushing myself, just blogging what I can blog , that is why I just make my own ideas to figure out what can I blog that is how I am nearly up to 300 ! The one who inspired me with blogging were 4 people from the Kia Manawanui they are Grace, Lydia, Edith, Aleathia. I chose these people because they always would put more effort and push them self to blog everyday also because they are the student council, they also are really good by showing the school values and always ready to blog something. Those girls are really good student in tamaki that is why they have a growth mindset they are really cool to know really well!

Many thanks

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Famous people on september

Kia ora  readers ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be blogging about famous people on september ! Here are some names 

1. Kelsey chow
2. 
3.  Zenayda
4.  

1. Alecia Beth Moore aka pink

1.  Adam sandler

1.  Nick jonas 

 Those are the one I know who are actually famous for something so Zenyda and kelsey chow also adam sandler are actress except for nick jonas and  Alecia Beth Moore are singers who would wow you !!
Question: who is your farviotie celebrity ?!
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🎉Good afternoon 🎉

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Hola reader ! Welcome back to my blog !  I would just like to say Good afternoon ! Good afternoon everyone how having you been doing in this afternoon ! 

Many thanks 

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Question:what are you doing right now

Hope you had a sad afternoon by just staying inside and being to be bored by the akaward rain !

memorie verse

Bonjour readers ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be blogging a memory verse ! 

This the memory verse from  Genesis 1:1

In the beginning God created the heaven and the earth.

This memory verse is about god who create this world and earth for everyone to live that is why we have a everlasting life  that is why he made this earth so that we can have peace all together and that we can see the world how it is !
Many thanks

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🎉Grace nearly reaching up to 100 this year !! 🎉🎉

Malo lele ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be saying congratulations to my sis for nearly reaching up to 100 I am so happy for  that she is nearly up to 100 because she has tried to have a growth mindset and she hasn't nearly reach up because she been reading books, do homework. She had more than me but than I want to catch up too her so yeah so congrats sis you are the best sis I ever had we are nearly close she is like the mom and I'm the kid which is weird and she is really kind and smart who would like to complete work on time she has a really amazing mind also she is a great singer when we sing together!!

Many thanks !

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😎Congrats Lydia😎

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Hola everyone ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be saying Congrats Lydia for reaching up to 200 this year ! I am really proud for her and she had a really fantastic that she has a growth mindset and she has bening to do well with amazed that she is doing more cybersmart it is kind of good that I appreciate and she is a really great student leader that she is amazing to be a student in Tamaki and learn more ! Lydia is beautiful and smart that she believe in herself and would try again she is a really lovely person to have in class and she is a very intalenge person to have in class

Merory verse

Nia Sa Bula ! Welcome back to my blog ! Tonight I will be blogging a meroy verse from the bible ! This meroy verse is from the new testmeant from John chapter 3:16

here is the verse :

 For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that who so ever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life.

 

This is all about  jeues die on the cross and God love this world  and that he should not b perish but he would have everlasting life !
I love this verse  because it reallly is about god and jeues !

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HOLIDAYS !!!!!!!!! YES YES

Bula vanka ! Welcome back to my blog ! Tonight I would just be saying that this the first week of HOLIDAYS!! Today was a really a tried day because we had to do clean up the house which was boring at the same time we nearly spent our time watching tv after that we went to the Hobson drive park and had some fun ! But I think that the other days would be better than this day because Tomorrow morning I will be sleeping  and then wake up do something ! I am so ready for some fun! 
Question: How is your holiday going 
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Thing that I enjoyed term 2

Kia ora ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I made this about what I enjoy in term 2

Good afternoon

Bonjour ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be just saying good afternoon ! How is your weekend going and have a  sunshine day this afternoon !
Question: What are you doing now ?

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Inquiry prestation

Nia sa bula ! Today I will be blogging my presentation I made for Ako evening! It is mainly about god who create this universe and earth also about the big bang creating the universe also how that atom coiled boom !!! that how planets were made for the big bang theory belief ! 
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IM BACK!!!!

Kia ora ! Welcome back to my blog !  Today I will be just saying that I'm back! 
I am sorry for not blogging this week because it is the last day of school I want to blog more so that why I just want to say I'm back ! Hope you enjoy this holidays ! Have fun with whanau and friends

Maths

Malo lele ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I will be blogging ! Maths ! 

Walking narrative

Brainstorm of ideas - friends, walking, bush, mud, wet dew Describing character/setting - going for a walk to the bush, bags, bright kowhai t shirt, pink mawhero t shirt, Ideas for the problem - Got hurt, fall down, took for ages, winning, arguing, Ideas for the solution - Happy, excited, played, talk , stop arguing,

 

start, fall down, took for ages, winning, arguing, 

Ideas for the solution -  Happy, excited, played, talk , stop arguing,

Start here: On a chilled relaxing saturday  morning Jack and James went for a cool relaxing bush walk out in the woods .

When they were walking  they got see the beautiful mother nature with amazing it amazing creature shroud by the bright seaweed green when they were walking they could explore more out in the nature, that they were having so much fun on that relaxing day.

Meanwhile James went off by himself of to a  bush farway from Jack that he was hiding than he fall down and hurt himself. Now he was stuck because he couldn't find his way  out so Jack went to look for him, when he was looking for him but he couldn’t find him so he look at every bush but he could still look for him so he said to himself “where are you james” he yelled  James heard him and said “here in the end of the bushes”

So Jake ran to him and found him, they both went back home and were happy to see each other that they had a wonderful morning and adventure looking  at the creatures that it was a great exploring.

Dialouge

Focuses for writing this week
Explanation in my own words.
Where do speech marks go
Before the talking and after the talking
How to put in other punctuation
? they go inside after the speech mark come  in
When to start a new line or when to keep writing
Only if there is more 2 people than they start a new line but if it is 1 person than mean it can still go on 
Different words for ‘said’
Respond, Asked, Yelled, shouted, mumbled,mutreed, gasped, thought, continue, whispered,answer,chuckled,uttered,
Adding adverbs
Respond politely, Ask politely, Scream angry, Cried sadly,  

EXAMPLES
“Who can I pick on?” asked Miss Ashley.
“Me” replied Timote. 

“How was your day?” asked Hope.
“Great, thank you” replied Miss Ashley. 

“How was your weekend” asked Dwyane.
“It was good” responded Havea.

If more than one person is talking, you put the reply underneath.
Mary was a beautiful girl who was wearing her long black hair in two plaits. She asked her mum, “can I go to the pools today?”. 
“Why do you want to go” mum replied.
“It’s hot and I want to cool off”. 
“Fine then”

If it’s only one person, you keep going.
Little red riding hood walked along the dirt path and thought to herself “I’m getting hungry”. She had walked a looooonng way but the thought of warm apple pie when she got to grandma’s house kept her going.

MY GROUP’S EXAMPLE.
“How was your day?”asked lily

“It was fantastic” reliped hiria 

“How about you?” says hiria

“My day was fine thank you” replied lily 

“What are you going to do today ?” asked hiria

“I am going to learn about science” happily said lily

“How created of you lily ”said hiria

“Thank you for saying that”lily repiled

 

Kia ora ! Welcome back to my  blog ! Today Rm 7 were learning about speech marks to start of a conversation with a friend or a group ! We had so much fun talking to each that we find out other words of said !