On Monday (17th of september 2018) Room 7 did a special activity ( which was called Yoga challenge). We just wanted to have some fun doing the yoga challenge. We got into buddies and sat on the mat.
My buddy was Waiari, “when we saw the first poise we were like ” OMG this is so easy to do” I told Waiari “ Yeah your right Lily” Waiari respond nicely
So we had to sit down and clasp your hands and lead back. The next one, we need to stand up to make a heart with our buddy, it was pretty easy then I thought.
The other one got really challenging because we had to be really flexible, we have to put one of leg up then hold hands, the other one got really challenging me and Waiari started to kept on trying every yoga, most of it was like shapes and pretty easy.
The other ones got more harder, Me and waiari kept on trying again and never giving up because it was a challenge, we like that even if we failed we got up and try so then we can never give up, one of the poise were pretty hard ( which was the last one ) because someone had do the bridge ( which was me ) Waiari had to do.
I felt really happy to do the activy because it was really fun, how we can see if we are flexible or not.
Authour:lily
checked by waiari
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Surface features
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Capital letters at the beginning of a sentence
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Capital ‘I’
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Capital letters for names of places and people
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Full stops at the end of a sentence
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Speech marks when people are talking
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Punctuation - ? ! ; : ‘
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Words are written in past tense
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Connectives - next, then, afterwards
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Interesting and difficult adjectives
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Deep features
Introduction has who, what, when, where, why, and how
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Conclusion has a reflective statement or says how you felt
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Ideas/events in the right order
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3 paragraphs
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Metaphors and similes
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Onomatopoeia, alliteration and/or idiom
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Different types of sentences - short, long, compound and complex
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One thing that lily did well was…Capital letters at the beginning of a sentence
One thing that lily needs to Speech marks when people are talking,
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