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Sunday, December 2, 2018

Should Zoos Exists

SHOULD ZOOS EXISTS!
Malo lele ! Welcome back to my blog ! Today I'll be talking about Persuasive writing !


To start with, when the wildlife is threatened by the people who are destroying their habitat. Some people abuse animals on festivals (In Thailand they beat up elephant's just to entertain people)

The fact is that some animals get protected from their enemies and some gets scared of the zoo keepers because the don't know them really well, they had to move away from their wildlife into  the zoo and they get small place in the zoo which means the animals doesn't like their place in the zoo because they want freedom and go to the  wild but it's because their home is not really safe for them !

The Important thing about animals is to keep them safe in the zoo by feeding them and healing them with medication and trying to give them enough space to live in the zoo. The zoo was exist for a reason because it was for the animals to have a great home.

Just imagine that animals will die if they were never existed in this world and our world wouldn't be a great place without animals because they make this world look like amazing. We have animals because they make our world look really special and we wouldn't of have animals today if it wasn't the zoo keepers saving their lives  by feeding them and healing them with medication. 

In my opinion I disagree because animals should have freedom with their lives and they will explore many thing in the wildlife but its because their habitat is getting exist so they need a better place to live like  the zoo. The animals are best to live in the zoo because  they can have medication  and load of food from the zoo keepers, the thing that the animals hate about the zoo is they get small space because they don't have enough space they can't explore everything around them.

Most people goes to the zoo to find out more about animals because animals are really fun to learn about animals because they are really interesting .Many people love animals because how cute  they are amazing to learn about.

Although both sides have valid arguments, Zoo should still be existed for animals to live with food and medication because it's important to keep our animals alive so that our world is a beautiful place with animals !

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